redaction

On-Yomi: サン

Koohii stories:

1) [mantixen] 27-7-2009(18): During post-production of a movie, redaction is required for "red action", or action that results in a bloody accident, like when they miscalculated how large an object Spider-Man could hold up with both hands.

2) [abaddon] 29-5-2008(10): Calculate, st bernard, venom: Venom had made an insidious plan to strike at the redaction office of the Daily Bugle, to scare the free press. He plans to leave corpses of dead St.Bernards on every desk of the news office. Now, he still needs to calculate how many St. Bernards are required…

3) [Katsuo] 5-8-2010(7): The editor of a family newspaper finds a story that’s a bit too graphic. It describes in detail how during kendo practice Spiderman's bamboo stick snapped and impaled the eye of a nearby St. Bernard. “Hmm, some redaction needed here,” thinks the editor.

4) [Aerin] 25-3-2008(4): With a bamboo brush and I keen eye I edit the paper and draw big red thread-like marks under the poor sentences that need to be redacted (revised, edited).

5) [kioku3] 18-8-2009(3): The original story of Spiderman showed Peter Parker with a genius St. Bernard who could calculate by using an abacus with his paws (not two hands). There was a redaction when they realized they needed action and a villain and not just 2 hours of a dog using an abacus.